RetributionVox's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemon Battle 16-bit]

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cool midi rip bro.

[Sting - Over]

YOU HATH DECIEVED ME.

You tricked me into thinking you were gonna spit over that Drake beat. But, this beat is sick no matter what.

Blasphem-E responds:

It's always a beat if labeled Sting. Wyze is for vocals. Thanks though. By the way, when are you going to spit that verse on the open collab?

[Ng MC Cypher 1 - The Beginning]

ahhhgh

I think my verse should've been better, right? Gahgh. Everyone hit me up, so we can possibly do a ng mixtape collab.

[Extractor]

Yes.

MIND CRIME IS THE BEST GAME EVER.

[Lucid Dreamer]

Well first of all.

This whole piece is pretty epic.
Hans Zimmer is pretty fucking epic himself, for you seem to have integrated several elements into this song.. Which is also epic.

And also, Inception is taking over everyone's minds.

[Super Mario Galaxy Feel Bros!]

omg. I need to know.

What program do you use D:

[Hear me now (final)]

Aww shit.

This is tight. Instrumental plz?

THEICONICICON responds:

Wyze-stingray.com
pay him 20 dollars for the untagged version
beat is called consequential

[[microphone]]

The beat is sick, can't go wrong with that.

Some of the lyrics are a bit off. The key to a great hip hop song is clear pronunciation (some of the words you spat sounded slurred), a good hook (hearing microphone every second of the hook was kind of bland, but catchy.), and tight flow (it also sounded like you recorded this in a rush, cause you pronounced a few words wrong). Good lines, though.

Best part: "Am i playin im just sayin deranged mayne of games
so crazy you gotta SHUTTER flows to ISLAND my brain
but I guess im in my own world
my words will leave your vision blurred
accomponnied by 100 degree Throat Burns"

Again, the beat is sick as hell. If you could give me the instrumental, I'd be soooo happy, dude.

The sound of your voice is type monotone, you gotta put some "oomph" into it. Especially if you want to add backup vocals, like, actually record on top of the main track instead of making it sound like a loud echo.

4/5

8/10

Keep up the good work.

THEICONICICON responds:

thanks i appreciate the review man..definetly something i will take into consideration...i think its because i just wrote it so when i recorded i didnt have that sense of being on the track....its just all things i can work on... o and the beat is
"slaughterhouse microphone instrumental"

[Halo Rap]

Yeaaahh! YEAAAHH!

YYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
!!

NOTHIN BUT 'NADES!
SCARED OF THE FLOOD, WHO SCARED OF THE FLOOD?! SOMEBODY LYING LIKE PIGS IN THE MUD.

[Zelda: Theme (Piano)]

Honest review.

Add more instruments. Piano songs are getting a bit played out. This also sounds like you just took the Midi file from like VGmusic or something and put it on FL Studio. Just do better next time and don't be so lazy as to rip midi's.

Kreepman responds:

people still use VGMusic? - I'm sorry, I thought we were in 2011, not 1997.